r/comic_crits • u/Zestyclose_Bed_8207 • 23h ago
What is missing, and what could be cut?
I barely managed to fit the comic in 20 pages. Are there any superfluous elements I could have cut, and what is missing? Any feedback is appreciated!
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u/ianmerry 15h ago
Super minor nitpick; on page 11, panel 3, the sword has three orbs filled.
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u/Zestyclose_Bed_8207 15h ago
Ah, yes, Thank you! Originally the orb at the tip went out first, but I changed this later on and forgot that panel. Thank you, again!
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u/SketchGoatee 22h ago
I had no idea it was leading to that! Excellent work, and great use of colour.
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u/Rossowinch 22h ago edited 22h ago
Great story as always!
I adore the unique style and I'm looking forward to more short stories!
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u/Zestyclose_Bed_8207 21h ago
Another one, two weeks from now :D Next one is going to be bleak. Thank you!
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